Thursday, March 20, 2008

Hawaii

The flight there makes me oh-so excited.
The humid wind makes my hair fly.
The sun on my skin makes me know I'm getting a tan.
The waterfalls make me happy.
The culture makes me feel enlightened.
The last day makes me wish for more.
The flight away makes me want to go back.

3 comments:

kelsey said...

ilike this because its very descriptive

kelsey said...

ilike this because its very descriptive

brittany. said...

I liked this because it makes me picture Hawaii. I liked it a lot! I wish i can go there soon I have never bben theere before. I want to visit Hawaii I think you should keep writing like this its amazing